Improvisation no. 3 "It's gonna be okay"

I personally think I messed up big time on this one... The melody had the potential to be SO much better.. But I didn't wanna make a retake because I'd consider that cheating It wouldn't be an improvisation then, now would it? XD


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CnSX2GnvJ74

There's nothign wrong with perfecting what comes out of you all the great composers spent time fine tuning everything! You've got some natural skill coming out here.

Around the 1 minute mark the ending was a bit awkward, but i'm sure we both know that! After that you picked it up and it sounded great again

I think you're getting better and you're experimenting even more keep it up! because I see potential in you ^_^

(plus it was kind of cool to see your face this time around)

The things i could suggest for improvment is try to tie the whole song together around one common theme, this will help to make the music feel more joined, this one soudned a bit disjointed at times, but don't take that the wrong way Just use the info to keep improving!

Thanks again for sharing your music with us

Thanks Andrew, yeah I know I totally messed some parts up. The original melody had som really good potential..

I think it's time I start working on a composition !

I loved this one as well. I honestly don't have anything negative to say about this one, you did a great job in my opinion, whether you made a few mistakes or not. Keep it up!

I would say your improvisation is so MUCH BETTER than just OK !
Loved it, keep up the good work!

Best,

Elena.

Why don't you post an improvisation Andrew? I'd love to hear one =)

pianohama wrote:Why don't you post an improvisation Andrew? I'd love to hear one =)

hahaha, that would be hilarious:) since i have no real skill at them. Maybe i'll try one day! I know in theory how they should be done, but in a practical sense I'm not that great:P I'd say you're better at improvisations than i am

Admin Andrew wrote:

pianohama wrote:Why don't you post an improvisation Andrew? I'd love to hear one =)

hahaha, that would be hilarious:) since i have no real skill at them. Maybe i'll try one day! I know in theory how they should be done, but in a practical sense I'm not that great:P I'd say you're better at improvisations than i am

You are too modest I bet you have tremedous drills in your finger I bet you could create something unique with it

maggiekedves wrote:

Admin Andrew wrote:

pianohama wrote:Why don't you post an improvisation Andrew? I'd love to hear one =)

hahaha, that would be hilarious:) since i have no real skill at them. Maybe i'll try one day! I know in theory how they should be done, but in a practical sense I'm not that great:P I'd say you're better at improvisations than i am

You are too modest I bet you have tremedous drills in your finger I bet you could create something unique with it

Heh, I'll just let you guys think that I'm awesome at improv (i'm really not) thanks for the confidence though!