Improvisation nr. 2 "Depression"

Okay so I've done another improvisation, and after listening to it, I decided to name it "Depression" If you come up with a better title, please do tell.

It's currently processing on youtube I'll post it up as soon as its finished!

Edit:

Here we go

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a1tFrG_caQI

Next time you should do blues, or a happy melody.... Depressive music tend to make the listener depressive ^^

Very good on-the-fly playing. You should record them in midi

VictorCS wrote:Next time you should do blues, or a happy melody.... Depressive music tend to make the listener depressive ^^

Very good on-the-fly playing. You should record them in midi

Haha yeah I don't know, I got a thing for emotional playing =) I'll try to do a happier one for next imrpovisation, I promise !

Very nice! this song didn't make me depressed at all, you've got a nice alberti bass pattern going on. The melody line and the chord changes were very sweet to the ears

the only thing i could complain about is sometimes the rhythm sounded a bit ..."mushy"?? it seemed like some of your notes were getting cut off which made it feel a tad rushed, i noticed you started speeding up from the beginning to the end, was all that planned? either way you did an amazing job and all those things aren't too important, they're just nit picky!

the overall impression is great i'd give you 8 out of 10 on this improv, great work! I hope you keep going! I think you've got some natural talent for this!

Admin Andrew wrote:Very nice! this song didn't make me depressed at all, you've got a nice alberti bass pattern going on. The melody line and the chord changes were very sweet to the ears

the only thing i could complain about is sometimes the rhythm sounded a bit ..."mushy"?? it seemed like some of your notes were getting cut off which made it feel a tad rushed, i noticed you started speeding up from the beginning to the end, was all that planned? either way you did an amazing job and all those things aren't too important, they're just nit picky!

the overall impression is great i'd give you 8 out of 10 on this improv, great work! I hope you keep going! I think you've got some natural talent for this!

Woah thanks man! Well, as I said in the other thread, I have absolutely no education in Rhythm, I need to do some practicing on that, so I kinda mess up the rhytm alot >_< I'll practice it for the next time And Btw I had no idea that arpegio pattern had a name

Great improvisation buddy, I enjoyed it. I'm also a fan of minor scales, they're very touching and emotional, which is what I love in music!

The only thing I can say thats not positive about this improvisation is the rhythm, and I'm going to agree with exactly what Andrew said. Other than that, it's beautiful and I hope you make more!

Jordan wrote:Great improvisation buddy, I enjoyed it. I'm also a fan of minor scales, they're very touching and emotional, which is what I love in music!

The only thing I can say thats not positive about this improvisation is the rhythm, and I'm going to agree with exactly what Andrew said. Other than that, it's beautiful and I hope you make more!

Thanks man, you liking it means alot to me, all you guys, since your 1000x more experienced than me, it means alot...

I know the rhythm was a bit shitty And I think the reason why it got raised during the video was because I got a bit to excited :p

Hey no worries about the rhythm, we're all still learning! It's just a process! You've got the right attitude to continue to grow and become better. Any idea's for the next improv?

I think you start improvising to your favorite songs, and post a video! There's an idea.

Admin Andrew wrote:Hey no worries about the rhythm, we're all still learning! It's just a process! You've got the right attitude to continue to grow and become better. Any idea's for the next improv?

Well yeah... I was thinking about three titles... Depending on the title i'll choose I'm guessing different music will come out of the improv...

1. "Sunshine"

2. "A brothers love"

3. "It's gonna be okay"