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My first composition

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Post by zielarz999 Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:24 pm

This is my first composition. It's short, but hope you enjoy it. Smile Key: D flat major


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Post by VictorCS Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:35 pm

I felt the bass pattern sounded a little repeating, but I really loved the rest, especially the fast runs. Sounded kinda sad and happy at the same time ^_^
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Post by zielarz999 Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:12 pm

About bass. Yes, it's quite simple and common, but that was a plan Razz I'll record it on my new piano next weekend. This is played by midi Smile

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Post by Circle_of_Fists Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:17 am

very creative, I like it!
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Post by cheesesandwitchs Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:48 am

thats really cool i like it keep up the good work Smile
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Post by KeyboardGal Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:25 pm

This is a great start! Good for you. While I agree with the earlier comment about the repetitive bass -- I think it is the kind of strategy that might help soothe a baby to sleep (as in a lullaby or berceuse) and so it seems an appropriate choice in this piece. Nothing to startle the baby right?

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Post by zielarz999 Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:39 pm

Thank you, all of you Razz I've started new piece, more complex. I think I'll finish it before weekend.

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Post by aendym Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:20 pm

Hey Zealarz!
I really loved it! It truly has something of a lullaby and it is really relaxing! Its totally nice to listen to!!! Thanks for your post! =)
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Post by Hey, I can Play!!! Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:58 pm

Nice work!
Looking forward to hearing your next piece, way to go!

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Post by Kelly Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:39 pm

VictorCS wrote:I felt the bass pattern sounded a little repeating (...)

It's inevitable, I have to agree with Victor. But the melody is very nice. Good work. Wink
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