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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
maggiekedves wrote:thomandy wrote:Finaly I got to upload it ^_^ The audioquality isnt all that , couse of the static noise! But &$^# happens =)
Hope you Enjoy, its my very first composition. Comment! Your honest opinion, I wont be offended
The recording is loud, so use the volumebutton
Nocturnal Dream
I have to tell you it was worth the waiting. I actually like when there is a pause for effect plus you are right different parts should be separated by some pause.
I really liked it and true enough it was dreamy. So keep up composing Maestro
Thanks ALOT Maggie


Then I havnt practiced it for nothing

Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
Okay you wanted my honest opinion; for your first own piece, it was good. It wasn't like *WOW!!!* awesome. But it was a good beginners piece.
Now for some constructive critic so you may improve for your next piece;
The harmony was good, the rhythm was okay. I'd say that you will have to work abit on your melody line. It was a bit to repetetive, and I was kind of waiting for something to happen, you got some variation in nicely when you changed to a higher octave.
Also, was those pauses intended? If it was, I think it would sound alot better without those pauses, but hey, it's your work and your emotions in this piece so I got nothing to say about that part.
One more thing is that I think you're holding down the damper pedal too much, you should practice that a bit...
So in general I'd say you did pretty good for your first piece, considering you haven't played for long also.
I'd give it a 6/10 in other cases, but considering it's your first piece and you haven't played for long, I'd say 9/10.
You're definetly on the right track, keep practicing!
Now for some constructive critic so you may improve for your next piece;
The harmony was good, the rhythm was okay. I'd say that you will have to work abit on your melody line. It was a bit to repetetive, and I was kind of waiting for something to happen, you got some variation in nicely when you changed to a higher octave.
Also, was those pauses intended? If it was, I think it would sound alot better without those pauses, but hey, it's your work and your emotions in this piece so I got nothing to say about that part.
One more thing is that I think you're holding down the damper pedal too much, you should practice that a bit...
So in general I'd say you did pretty good for your first piece, considering you haven't played for long also.
I'd give it a 6/10 in other cases, but considering it's your first piece and you haven't played for long, I'd say 9/10.
You're definetly on the right track, keep practicing!
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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
pianohama wrote:Okay you wanted my honest opinion; for your first own piece, it was good. It wasn't like *WOW!!!* awesome. But it was a good beginners piece.
Now for some constructive critic so you may improve for your next piece;
The harmony was good, the rhythm was okay. I'd say that you will have to work abit on your melody line. It was a bit to repetetive, and I was kind of waiting for something to happen, you got some variation in nicely when you changed to a higher octave.
Also, was those pauses intended? If it was, I think it would sound alot better without those pauses, but hey, it's your work and your emotions in this piece so I got nothing to say about that part.
One more thing is that I think you're holding down the damper pedal too much, you should practice that a bit...
So in general I'd say you did pretty good for your first piece, considering you haven't played for long also.
I'd give it a 6/10 in other cases, but considering it's your first piece and you haven't played for long, I'd say 9/10.
You're definetly on the right track, keep practicing!
Thanks for a great reply


And I agree about the damperpedal!! But it doesnt sound that mooshy of camera


Thanks for the 6/9 /10 =)
Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
You're welcome, one more thing is that you should not be afraid to "step out" from harmony sometimes, try adding a passing chromatic tone, it will increase its dramatic feeling by 100% I promise 
So for example if your playing from G major to A minor, you play G Major -> G# Diminished(Just raise the G from the G Major) -> A Minor.

So for example if your playing from G major to A minor, you play G Major -> G# Diminished(Just raise the G from the G Major) -> A Minor.
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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
pianohama wrote:You're welcome, one more thing is that you should not be afraid to "step out" from harmony sometimes, try adding a passing chromatic tone, it will increase its dramatic feeling by 100% I promise
So for example if your playing from G major to A minor, you play G Major -> G# Diminished(Just raise the G from the G Major) -> A Minor.
Okay, I really dont understand anything there


Diminished is also a word I dont remember what means, that and agumented

Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
Try playing this and you will understand what I mean
play g major (G B D), then sharp the G and you'll get G# B D (G# Dim chord) and then an A minor, play those 3 chords after each other
play g major (G B D), then sharp the G and you'll get G# B D (G# Dim chord) and then an A minor, play those 3 chords after each other
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thomandy wrote:pianohama wrote:You're welcome, one more thing is that you should not be afraid to "step out" from harmony sometimes, try adding a passing chromatic tone, it will increase its dramatic feeling by 100% I promise
So for example if your playing from G major to A minor, you play G Major -> G# Diminished(Just raise the G from the G Major) -> A Minor.
Okay, I really dont understand anything thereHaha... Havnt read about harmony, I just sat down and started to improvise the tunes. But I plan to learn harmony sometime, quite soon maby, then maby Ill understand more of what you just said
Diminished is also a word I dont remember what means, that and agumented
I posted a video in the General section where the guy is teaching a Xmas song and tells all about how you create diminished and augmented and stuff... maybe it is worth to check it out.
But I also need to learn these stuff... I might post something about it as soon as I understand them

Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
pianohama wrote:Try playing this and you will understand what I mean
play g major (G B D), then sharp the G and you'll get G# B D (G# Dim chord) and then an A minor, play those 3 chords after each other
Okay, Ill try

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maggiekedves wrote:
I posted a video in the General section where the guy is teaching a Xmas song and tells all about how you create diminished and augmented and stuff... maybe it is worth to check it out.
But I also need to learn these stuff... I might post something about it as soon as I understand them
Ill go check it out

Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
Nice job thomandy, it is a fine piece. All the rest overs have said, just practice on 

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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
Phobik2000 wrote:Nice job thomandy, it is a fine piece. All the rest overs have said, just practice on
Thanks

Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
thomandy wrote:Finaly I got to upload it ^_^ The audioquality isnt all that , couse of the static noise! But &$^# happens =)
Hope you Enjoy, its my very first composition. Comment! Your honest opinion, I wont be offended
The recording is loud, so use the volumebutton
Nocturnal Dream
Uploaded again but with more athmosfare(less light) And a dreamy sound =)
After little critic on the pauses, I tryed to shorten them down... And now I got a smoother verson I think.
At 1.35 I push just a tad to hard, and then a different sound appear, but I know... =)
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The weird 52 to 55 sound is gone in the "dream" version, I think it was something in my head...
Fare should be sphere
Fare should be sphere
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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
thomandy wrote:
Uploaded again but with more athmosfare(less light) And a dreamy sound =)
After little critic on the pauses, I tryed to shorten them down... And now I got a smoother verson I think.
At 1.35 I push just a tad to hard, and then a different sound appear, but I know... =)
I love the ambiance and let me tell you the stabilization of the camera made it more professional

Without the longer pauses it had more flow but less recognizable with the part... but I still like it a lot.
Oh and I forgot to tell the opening picture with the title is great

Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
maggiekedves wrote:
I love the ambiance and let me tell you the stabilization of the camera made it more professional![]()
Without the longer pauses it had more flow but less recognizable with the part... but I still like it a lot.
Oh and I forgot to tell the opening picture with the title is great
Thanks again


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Hi Thomas!! That was very creative.
I'm not that into technical stuff with music. I must say it's really something unique what you just did. ^_~ I like it!

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zeroflash wrote:Hi Thomas!! That was very creative.I'm not that into technical stuff with music. I must say it's really something unique what you just did. ^_~ I like it!
Hi zeroflash =) You dont have to be into technical stuff to enjoy music, its you hart that decides what you like or not

And It is really nice for me to hear you say that


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Hey Thomas, i REALLY liked your song, it was GREAT for a first composition! VERY VERY GOOD! I loved your chord progression, and the little rests at the end of every phrase were very interesting to listen and wait for!
Thanks for posting and sharing it with us! ^_^
my heart was liking your song and that's all that matters right!
Thanks for posting and sharing it with us! ^_^
my heart was liking your song and that's all that matters right!

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Admin Andrew wrote:Hey Thomas, i REALLY liked your song, it was GREAT for a first composition! VERY VERY GOOD! I loved your chord progression, and the little rests at the end of every phrase were very interesting to listen and wait for!
Thanks for posting and sharing it with us! ^_^
my heart was liking your song and that's all that matters right!
That is All that matters

And thanks to you to, very nice to hear those words from you

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rawr! and i missed out on these! well i dunt wanna list all the songs u played here so... ALL of the music u posted here were greatly played.. i liked the canon (pop? version) sounds nice and since its been pointed out i wont say anything further.. but when i saw the original easy version u played.. thats the exact same one i learned. =] but anyway
go THOMAS!
go THOMAS!

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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
g0tfish wrote:rawr! and i missed out on these! well i dunt wanna list all the songs u played here so... ALL of the music u posted here were greatly played.. i liked the canon (pop? version) sounds nice and since its been pointed out i wont say anything further.. but when i saw the original easy version u played.. thats the exact same one i learned. =] but anyway
go THOMAS!
Thanks alot


Actually the "pop" verson and the slow verson is axactly the same, but in the faster verson on keyboard, I play at 120, and the slow is round 70. It is a nice verson

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Hey, Thomas, I just dropped by today with more time, I hadn't seen your performance yet, been busy with work, etc. And here I am on Saturday morning at 8 a. m. dreaming...
I loved your composition, especially the second version. Keep them coming! 


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Casyopea wrote:Hey, Thomas, I just dropped by today with more time, I hadn't seen your performance yet, been busy with work, etc. And here I am on Saturday morning at 8 a. m. dreaming...I loved your composition, especially the second version. Keep them coming!
Thanks alot


Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
Finally a managed to complete a recording that i am satiesfied with! 
Its of course not pro, but Im not either so thats okay
Started to learn this song 2 months ago, and been practicing on and of. =)
You might notice two strange glitches, think my camera is messed up somehow, but the sound isnt affected... So I dont mind them... -)
Für Elise - Ludvig van Beethoven
If you want to, you can comment on youtube aswell, since I never get any comments there, hahaha

Its of course not pro, but Im not either so thats okay

Started to learn this song 2 months ago, and been practicing on and of. =)
You might notice two strange glitches, think my camera is messed up somehow, but the sound isnt affected... So I dont mind them... -)
Für Elise - Ludvig van Beethoven
If you want to, you can comment on youtube aswell, since I never get any comments there, hahaha

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Re: Thomas's Performances - NEW Liszt Moments Musicaux D.01 - Page 39
You kinda rushed it in a few spots, which you can probably notice yourself easy 
Nice playing though

Nice playing though

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