Like writing?

Just curious if anyone here is into writing. If by any chance you are please let me know what you think of my skill.

http://www.helium.com/users/edit_show/482800

I can't watch it without creating a profile, which I don't want to. Can't you just post it here? :-)

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for more information pls visit: www.helium.com

I don't think he meant post a description of the website , maybe post what you wanted us to look at that you wrote?

Consists of poetry and essays here's one: (Love)


As you pass by, my heart began to jump

my cheeks turn rosy red

and my eyes attached to you

your presence so captivating

it moves me, as your eyes pierce through my swollen heart

The kiss you gave me, so warm melted my mind

the hug your gave me, so tight shattered my ribs

your love, so tender quickly stole my heart

and I so willing, gave it completely

I used to write at helium years back, but when i realized you couldn't withdraw an article even if you didn't feel right about that article anymore. I didn't like that so I stopped writing for them. I actually hate the fact that my article is up there still...I wish I could take it down.

you're poem isn't to bad. Did you have anyone in mind when you wrote this?

Yeah, I have a crush on this beautiful girl ( from Singapore) and this just came up . It kinda makes me sad thinking I can't meet her since I'm from the Philippines.

surehit123 wrote:Yeah, I have a crush on this beautiful girl ( from Singapore) and this just came up . It kinda makes me sad thinking I can't meet her since I'm from the Philippines.

Why cant you meet here??

I mean meet her personally.

surehit123 wrote:I mean meet her personally.

Why cant you meet her personally??

Oh that's cute. Its because I don't have a visa

surehit123 wrote:Oh that's cute. Its because I don't have a visa

Hehe Well, then I guess you get to meet her someday then? When you get a job and a visa and can travel to meet her!

yeah I sure hope so! I just hope that she wont get a boyfriend in the next 10-15 years

surehit123 wrote:yeah I sure hope so! I just hope that she wont get a boyfriend in the next 10-15 years

Hehe 10-15? I thought maybe you was gone meet her in maybe 2years.
Dont expect her to be single for 10-15 years, no women is single for so long unless they Really want to..
Even if they want to they usually end up with a boyfriend cause we guys are trying to get girls all the time, anywhere hehe...

And you might meet someone at home as well!!!

That's another way to shatter my dreams I hope you're right about meeting someone at home

surehit123 wrote:That's another way to shatter my dreams I hope you're right about meeting someone at home

Didnt mean to do that
Yeah, enough fish in the sea

ORRR!!! You could just get in the ocean and swim to her....ya! that would impress her...

If I swim to her there are three things that can happen.

1st: She thinks that I really do love her and accepts me.
2nd: She thinks I'm obsessed and crazy
3rd: I get eaten by sharks. (I'ts a long way from the Philippines all the way to Singapore.)

hehe, that's when you ride a killer whale and spear the sharks with a rod then roast them over a fire and bring them to her family for dinner. Then the father is so impressed he gives his daughter to you in marriage at your request. That's how pimps do it

You have a very wild imagination I can hardly imagine myself riding free wheely

Admin Andrew wrote:hehe, that's when you ride a killer whale and spear the sharks with a rod then roast them over a fire and bring them to her family for dinner. Then the father is so impressed he gives his daughter to you in marriage at your request. That's how pimps do it

such a lovely romantic story

hey is that really your cat?

oh man just look behind the cat u will already know this is a beautiful , lovely piano (I dont have a piano i have a keyboard) so this is for sure not my cat.
NOT MY CAT.

Yeah thought so, I was also going to ask you about the piano since it was s lovely